So I was looking threw some old boxes and I found my old diary. I haven't wrote in it since we moves so there were so pretty old things in it. In the back, there was a poem though that I had wrote. It was call "The Last Moments Of Life". It was a really good poem I wrote so I'm going to blog it.
The Last moments of life
by Emily Schnare
Shadows fall, I can't hear a thing.
Someone comes close but I don't know who it is.
Then comes the crash!
I feel my face hot,
Though it is really cold.
The world, my life, everything I knew...
Gone.
I check to see who is around me.
No one.
Silence blocks my hearing.
BOOM!
The noise comes flooding in.
Every word I ever spoke comes in at once.
I scream!
No one hears me.
It's too late anyway.
It's too late for me.
I am gone...
I would love feedback on this poem.
Info: I wrote this poem after my sister passed away. I don't know if that has anything to do with it's depressing tone. I hope not....
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